November, 2009

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Simple, but encouraging.

Tuesday, November 24th, 2009

D.I.Y., my suburban slipstream/horror flash story, came back. So I sent it right back out to a market with potential.

“The Ancient Bridge” was my first story of the ‘modern era’. It’s a sword-based fantasy story. The website that I had confidence would publish it folded, of course. I’ve gone ambitious with this one and sent it out to a top site. I’ll work through the list.

Finished my notes on Storyteller, thought out more of my next process story, and came up with another idea that I like, reworking a classic story.

I liked this article quite a bit: it’s simple, but encouraging: What if? What happens next? Two secret weapons for aspiring writers by J.C. Hutchins at Tor.com.

Revision?

Tuesday, November 17th, 2009

My latest story, “Alchemy”, is probably my best story, and is really my first at full short story length, right at 5000 words. I’ve gotten positive feedback from my friend/reader, who is a writing instructor. And I actually got positive feedback from Cory Doctorow, whose work influenced the story. This morning I got a very encouraging rejection email for the story. Both Cory and the editor suggested essentially the same things: that the three main characters may be one too many, and that their motivation may need to have another dimension, rather than a unified, altruistic purpose. I’ve also just finished reading Storyteller by Kate Wilhelm, which is about Clarion, and about fledgling writers learning to revise one’s stories, rather than being inflexible.

So, do I go back and revise this story, as has been suggested by very qualified people? It would be hard for me structurally because there are central events that are based on there being three people. I also wanted there to be three aspects of geekdom: the competent man, the coder, and the gonzo/artist. Or do I keep it as it is and move on to something new? I’ve sent it out once more as it is, and I prefer it this way. But I may reconsider.

All in (or out actually).

Monday, November 16th, 2009

Everything written is submitted, seven pieces. A couple of the markets are notoriously slow to respond and a couple are probably out of my unpublished league. The waiting is tough. So I’ve got to prepare to write.

I was pleased with the results, if not the drawn out timeline, of the process I used to produce “Alchemy”. So, I’ve been reading snippets from all over: The 48 Laws of Power, 20 Master Plots, The Canon, The Worst-Case Scenario Survival Handbook, The Art of War, and the Collected Poems of Dylan Thomas.

Finished Storyteller by Clarion’s Kate Wilhelm – info that reinforces several ideas and gave me plenty to think about. I’m reading stories in the Wastelands anthology.

This is an excellent article – Ten Things to Remember if You Want to Be a Published Writer.

An awful lot going on at work, but it’s time to write.

Staying with it

Sunday, November 8th, 2009

Virus-inspired hard drive crash. I theorize that I let it happen by clicking yes to a box, of which I should have been more suspicious. Reinstall gives me a clean slate and a faster computer, but substantial file loss. Fortunately I had just gmailed all my stories to myself.

Speaking of – have all my stories out but one, and I will find a market for it today. Reworked a ‘first contact’ story beginning into a flash story and sent it to 365tomorrows. I’m actually optimistic on that one.

Is it possible that discussing my submissions and rejections is a bad idea? Is it too “don’t look at the man behind the curtain”? Would it lead to a more likely rejection of a story that I’ve submitted some where before? Possibly, but then that would suggest some editor actually took the time to read this, which is unlikely. We’ll go with it for now.

Football season is over and I’ve been able to exercise six days straight and I feel much better, but I haven’t made enough time to write. I’ve stayed busy with computer issues and school issues. I teach class nine out of the next twelve days and I have to conduct a system-wide teacher election, but then I’m off nine days in a row after that over Thanksgiving. If I can avoid time sinks, I should be able to write.